the preaching task

Lance Stone
Revd Dr Lance Stone, Minister, Emmanuel United Reformed Church, Cambridge

Our approach to sermon preparation depends largely on what we consider a sermon to be. Years ago, as a teenager and then as a student, I came under two particular influences which profoundly affected the way I construed sermons – one more positively than the other. The first was Revd George Duncan,  minister of St George’s Tron, Glasgow, who was famous for sermons that were constructed round points – often three – usually beginning with the same letter. To this day I recall a sermon by Duncan that I must have heard nearly 40 years ago. I cannot remember the text, though I think it was from John, but its theme was the Gospel and it’s three points were ‘Fashioned in its Truth, Fragrant in its Touch, and Forgotten in its Telling’. I remember little else about the sermon, but I have never forgotten those points and they suggest very concisely what the sermon was about. The other influence came when I went to university and went through a rather hyper-Calvinistic phase where the emphasis was very much on expository preaching. Here the task was to expound the passage, often going through it not just verse by verse but sometimes word by word, and it became a kind of badge of excellence if you had spent several lengthy sermons on one chapter, one verse, one phrase, or even one word! In contrast to my memory of Duncan, I can recall not a single sermon in all my years of sitting through lengthy expository preaching!

Preaching as an Art Form: Composition

So it was that Duncan’s approach, which certainly included elements of exposition, tended to influence my own, and this was partly because I considered – and still consider – preaching to be an art form. Very simply and at a basic level a work of art, in whatever medium, opens our senses and emotions and reorients us so that we perceive and imagine the world differently. We are given new or deeper perpsective. And in order to do this composition is crucial. Attention must be paid to structure and this is why I would say that Duncan’s sermons were works of art. Not always great works of art, but careful thought had been given to composition, to the incorporating of repetition, tension and contrast and sometimes (not always) to resolution of tension. The effect was not just that the text was expounded but that it became a kind of lens through which the world was re-envisioned and the listener was reoriented to life. Because of the emphasis on structure I very much appreciated the classic work of W.E. Sangster, The Craft of Sermon Construction[1], and in my years of teaching homiletics I drew on Sangster with his different structural strategies for dealing with the text (faceting, categorizing etc.).

From Points to Plot and Moves

Moving on from Sangster however, the other book that I found enormously helpful and stimulating was Eugene Lowry’s The Homiletical Plot: Sermon as Narrative.[2] Lowry’s basic point is that a sermon shoud have a plot. Lowry gives as an illustration the classic Hollywood film, High Noon. The basic plot of the film revolves around the marshal of a town, Will Kane, who falls in love with an marries a Quaker pacificst. Under her influence Kane hands in  his badge, renoucing his world of violence, and is preparing to leave town with his wife when he hears that a blood-thirsty gang of killers who bear a grudge against him are coming to get him. Kane is torn between his duty and his wife and the different values that they represent. What makes the film so compelling is the the dilemma presented and the question of how it is going to be resolved. Lowry points out that this is basically how plots work – by creating a tension, what he calls a ‘felt discrepancy’, which needs resolution. The question in the minds of viewers is ‘how is this going to be resolved?’, and this holds their interest and attention. Lowry goes on the suggest a pattern for sermons which operates on this dynamic.

Lowry’s work connects here with another classic book on homiletics, David Buttrick’s Homiletic Moves and Structures[3]. Buttrick’s is a massive tome but what was significant for me was helping me to go from points to moves. Over against a rather static model based on points, the task here is to consider the flow of the sermon, the moves made and how closure and resolution is achieved. Rather than a story with a plot, another appropriate paradigm is that of the symphony or piece of music where a theme is introduced, but then juxtaposed with other competing themes in such a way that they engage with another and come finally to some sense of resolution.

Picking a Fight with the Text

There are a variety of ways in which this may be done, depending very much on the texts under consideration, and of course this model is not always appropariate to particular passages or combinations of passages. But one way that can be fruitful is what I call ‘picking a fight with the text’. What is looked for here is something in the text that jars and pulls us up short and that demands resolution. It may be the fundamental tension or discrepancy between the Gospel and life, the way of the Kingdom  and the ways of the world. Or it may be some other discrepancy between text and life and this dissonance must be exposed and high-lighted and the polarities profiled and brought into conflict with each other before being brought to some sense of resolution. This is a version of what the philosopher Paul Ricoeur refers to as ‘the hermeneutics of suspicion’ and ‘the hermeneutics of retrieval’. As the terms suggest, it involves approaching the text with as critical, suspicious eye, picking a fight with it – and then retrieving it. This usually means letting the text win, but hopefully after a ‘detour’ in which a fuller disclosure takes place. Once again, the  aim along the way is to have the congregation asking themselves, ‘how is this going to be resolved?’

Perhaps it is best to illustrate with some examples. Take a sermon on Psalm 1, which contains the memorable image of the righteous person as a tree standing by the waterside yielding fruit in due season. This contrasts with the image of the wicked who are like chaff driven by the wind. Just  explore the images for a moment: righteousness as something solid, enduring, deeply rooted, immovable; while evil is fleeting, insubstantial, weightless. What a wonderful image – and how totally opposed to human experience. Is this an image that would commend itself to the people of Zimbabwe, stuck under a stubborn and defiant regime? Would this be the testimony of a holocaust survivor – that evil is fleeting and transient? Surely our experience is the very opposite: that evil is deep-rooted and weighty and solid, while it is the Martin Luther Kings and the Ghandis and the Oscar Romeros of this world who are blown away like chaff. Picking a fight with this text would involve showing how reality suggests a complete inversion of the images portrayed by the biblical text. Retrieval is rather harder! It might be a question of juxtaposing the text from Hebrews about faith being the assurance of things hoped for yet not seen (Hebrews 11:1), with creative use perhaps being made of the image in Revelation 22 of the river of the water of life flowing from God’s throne, with a tree of life on either side, with its leaves for the healing of the nations. Here is a revelation of the final, deep truth of the world where righteousness is rooted and evil put to flight. That is the deeper truth which we are called to live by, in the teeth of the apparent resilence of evil.

Another example, from the Epistles, might come from  Romans 4, where Paul looks to Abraham as the father of our faith, for he ‘put his faith in God and that was counted to him as righteousness’ (Romans 4:3). This is usually the pretext for a sermon on the priority of faith over works, with Abraham profiled as the paradigm of trusting belief. It might however be an idea to pause here and to look again at Abraham and to pick a fight with this portrayal of Abraham as the exemplar of our faith. Wasn’t this the Abraham who, after stubbornly arguing with God when appraised of God’s intention to destroy Sodom and Gomorrah, weakly and unquestioningly assented to the sacrifice of his own son? And isn’t this the same Abraham who twice passed off his wife Sarah as his sister in order to save his own bacon, jeopardising her life and safety? So much for Abraham as the paradigm of faith! Yet the truth is of course that Abraham was a curate’s egg. He was capable on the one hand of bravely and trustingly setting off from his home town into an unknown future with nothing but the promise of God to hold on to, while on the other hand placing members of his own family at grave risk. Yet God used him. There’s the sermon! Abraham our exemplar, not as the man of faith but as the mixed bag, capable of great faith and capable of great betrayal -as we know ourselves to be.

Or consider the parable of the prodigal son. Here of course the villain of the piece is the older brother who cannot join the party, consumed as he is with resentment at his younger brother. But how about preaching the passage from the older brother’s point of view and picking a fight with the father? Is it really the case that in all his years of faithful obedience his father has never given this older son so much as a kid to celebrate with his friends (Luke 15:29)? What might we learn here about appreciating and affirming people when they are quietly getting on with their responsibilities, and showing that they are valued? What might this say about the importance of celebrating the ordinary and routine, and of discerning gratitude in the taken-for-granted?

A Fight with Common Misunderstandings

Another related strategy is picking as fight not with the text, but with our misreading of the text. This involves expounding a common understanding of a passage and then, just when the point has been made, pausing and employing the rhetorical device of, ‘there’s only one problem…’ An obvious example would be Jesus’ parable of the house built upon the rock in Matthew 7: 24ff. This affords the preacher a golden opportunity to expound the importance of Christ as the strong rock, the sure anchor in an uncertain and threatening world. As financial markets collapse and as the human race with all its power and technology finds itself helpless before the storms of nature abused and ravaged, what is left that is sure and certain and reliable…? And the preacher may be able to tell of incidents where people’s lives have been in disarray and turmoil and yet somehow their faith has kept them grounded and centred and anchored on the rock of Christ. There’s only one problem… In this parable the rock is not Jesus. It’s not even the confession that Jesus is the Christ (as it is in Matthew 16:18). The rock here is obedience to Christ’s teachings – or, as we might put it in contemporary jargon, ‘the rock is walking the talk!’ And the teachings here are the profoundly difficult and searching ones found  in the Sermon on the Mount that precedes Jesus’ parable of the house built upon the rock. The lectionary here helpfully links this passage with Romans 1: 16-17, which extols the virtue of faith. This could be a cue for a sermon based on the tension between obedience to the demanding way of Christ and the free gift of grace apart from obedience, and the danger of ‘cheap grace’ as described by Bonhoeffer.

Another example might be a sermon on repentance, for example on Matthew 4: 12-23. Here a strategy would be to emphasise the meaning of repentance as change – change of behaviour – and the case for the need for change in our world can be easily made. We have the threat of global warming, we have massive inequality and injustice and it is not surprising that a politician like Barack Obama took up the theme of change in the recent American election. Amidst widespread disillusionment with the policies of the Bush administration, over 70% of  Americans believe, apparently, that America is heading in the wrong direction. Likewise Gordon Brown began his premiership here with a statement emphasising the need for change. When there is a deep-rooted sense that things are going wrong the case for change becomes compelling and all this can be elaborated in the first part of the sermon. There is only one problem… in the Gospel the motive for change is not bad news but good news. Jesus did not preach ‘repent for the world is going to hell’. Jesus preached, ‘repent for the kingdom of heaven is upon you (Matthew 4:17). In other words, God is reasserting God’s grip upon the world, the divine rule is breaking in. Jesus’ message is not ‘you must change’ but ‘things have changed’ and that is the compelling reason to realign and reorient human life. This can lead on to a discussion of how it is the promise and power of something new and good that has real power to motivate and to change us rather than yet more dismal stores and statistics of how awry things have gone.

These are just a few examples of one strategy that might be appropriate in some instances. The aim with is to preach a combative sermon where a fight is picked with what a passage says or hearers are wrong-footed into reading a familiar text differently. In each case there is a tension, what Lowry would call a ‘felt discrepancy’, that needs to be resolved. It is this that gives the sermon a plot with unpredictable moves that may hold the listeners’ attention and help disclose the surprising, renewing world of God’s Kingdom.


[1] W.E. Sangster, The Art of Sermon Construction (Epworth Press, 1954; Pickering and Inglis Ltd., 1978).

[2] Eugene Lowry, The Homiletical Plot: Sermon as Narrative (Westminster /John Knox Press, 2001).

[3] David Buttrick, Homiletic Moves and Structures (Augsburg Fortress Press, 1959)

{ 9 comments… read them below or add one }

1 Rev Andy Little January 9, 2009 at 10:04 pm

Lance, thank you so much for the article and the sermon on baptism. I doubt you remember me, but we had some conversations about “relevance” while I attended Westminster for a year. Both the essay and the sermon are very relevant, and appreciated.

Andy
Westminster United Presbyterian Church
Schenectady, NY

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2 Lance Stone January 15, 2009 at 10:36 am

Andy,
Great to hear from you. Of course I remember you, though not the conversation about relevance, though I can guess how that went! I hope minsitry is going well.
Keep in touch!
Lance

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3 Sarah Moore January 31, 2009 at 7:44 pm

Ah, Lance, the irony that I’m skiving sermon prep to read your article! I’ve become a bit of a risk taker when it comes to preaching these days and have (generally) found that the higher the risk, the greater the relevance to the congregation. But, the bigger the risk, the more important is structure, plot etc etc.
Sarah

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4 Lance Stone February 5, 2009 at 4:57 pm

And here am I, Sarah, skiving sermon prep too read your comment! It’s a good one. Go with the risk but keep the plot. I see you as the Tracy Emin of the pulpit!
Lance

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5 REVD.DAVID V.CLARKE February 17, 2009 at 11:40 pm

LANCE, My concern when I sit in the pew is that preachers would pick a fight with the texts,i.e. the lectionary
passages as a whole as part of their commitment to repossess the Bible in all its riches for us.
My pew expereince is a half use of the lectionary;,a one in four sundays use of the Old Testament,and virtually
an absence of the Psalm chosen.Often if the Old Testament is not avoided,it is used to compare unfavourably
with the New or simply as a finger pointing to the New, putting it not forward for its assets,but rather in a poor
light,as if giving a vote for Marcion,or a dualist Godhead.Preaching requires good fermentation and holy sweat
if it is to be art and instrument it should be, by weaving the woof of texts,into the current colour of the gospel,
utilising both the complementary strenths,and the questions of discontinuity in the passages. I hope the Bible
year will challenge preachers as much as congregations encouraged into participative study David.

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6 Lance Stone February 19, 2009 at 11:08 am

David,
Thanks for that comment. I love your phrase ‘good fermentation and holy sweat!’ I think you have put your finger on a real issue as regards picking a fight with the text. There are a number of well-established ’set pieces’that we are accustomed to – the ones that you refer to such as ‘Old Testament is bad, New Testament is good’ and so whatever fights we pick tend to be familiar ones which are well choreographed and where people already know the outcome and who wins (supposedly). The task is to bring fresh eyes to all the Bible, Old and New Testament, and to learn to feel the ‘felt discrepancies’ that run right through.
Yes – the Bible year must enrich preaching as that will help to enthuse about the Bible.
Best wishes,
Lance

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7 Lawrence February 19, 2009 at 2:29 pm

David,
Like Lance, I think your comment is an important one. ‘Picking a fight with the text’ to me is about looking for the things in the text that disturb our ‘usual’ readings – ie looking for areas of dissonance. We tend to read and behave as though the texts are to challenge others and as though we have it all ’sorted out’. That is particularly true of Jesus. The OT seems to me to be straightforwardly neglected! There is a depth to the spirituality expressed there that is wonderfully helpful because it penetrates into the mystery of having to live with God – something not at all easy. After all, if the final edit is post-exilic, it means the central problem is how to re-understand the faith in the light of the apparent contradictions of all that God has promised. That is why I like Walter Brueggemann so much – he insists we take the texts as they are seriously and the experience of Yahweh. The Psalms are a particularly rich resource in this context.

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8 winston spencer February 20, 2009 at 10:55 pm

Thanks this was verry helpful to me.It made me really think and look for things in the texts that are hidden .Gods word is a mystery

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9 MichaellaS July 21, 2009 at 3:18 pm

tks for the effort you put in here I appreciate it!

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